[Propaine]

hey guys,
I know I've only just posted my songs up, in another thread, but I'll be using this thread from now on to post my songs, enjoy.
This is my new permanent thread for songs, I'll let you know when it's updated.

Life without you.

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I'm so lost without you,
And I don't know how to move on,
Some day's I sit and think about us,
Regretting the day when we went wrong.

I know that I should let go,
But I honestly don't know how,
You've become the voice in my head,
And without you my world falls apart.

Your the one who understands,
Your the one who makes me feel,
Your the one who gives me life,
Your the one who makes this real.

The more I try and forget you,
I only remember more,
My love for you only gets stronger,
I've never felt like this before.

I want to be your reason why,
The one you run to when your down,
I want to be what you live for,
Because nothing is right,
When your not around.

Your the one who understands,
Your the one who makes me feel,
Your the one who gives me life,
Your the one who makes this real.

I hate that I still love you,
Becuase it makes me sad all day,
When I know that you don't love be back
I don't belive it has to be this way.

I can't make this by myself no more,
I want it to be me and you,
I think that's the way it's meant to be,
And i hope one day you realise that too.

Driven by the hate.

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Alone I face the world,
Never thought it would hurt like this,
After all you've done to me,
After all you've put me through,
I can't belive I ever cared at all.

You used me,
Then you put me down,
Now I've opened my eye's,
I see who you truely are.

Can't take this no more.

I'm so sick of the hurt,
I'm so sick of the pain,
I've been through this,
Time and again,
Consumed by hatred,
When I think of your name,
Need to get you out of my head,
If I want to stay sane.

You thought that you could keep me down,
Well I'm telling you your wrong,
Because the more you hurt me,
The more I become strong.

You poison everyone,
With your lies and hate,
Now your left with nothing,
You've have met your fate.

Can't take this no more.

I'm so sick of the hurt,
I'm so sick of the pain,
I've been through this,
Time and again,
Consumed by hatred,
When I think of your name,
Need to get you out of my head,
If I want to stay sane.

This is the end of the road for you,
There's nothing me you can do,
You've caused so much damage,
What ever you do to me,
I've been through it all.

There's one thing I must thank you for,
If I go through this again,
I will be able to deal with it,
Without feeling down,
Because I've been through it all before.

Whispers.

Spoiler

Desipite I've done nothing wrong,
You insist to cause pain,
And cause hurt for me,
And you have done all along.

Because your life's so bad,
You go and put me down,
To gain self satisfaction,
This is why I'm never around.

Silent whispers in the dark,
I'm hearing what you say,
Without even hearing a word,
I know what you think of me,
And I know what you say,
You try to hide your hate for me,
When I already know,
silent whispers.

Does it make you feel good,
Or does it make you feel glad,
That when ever you see me,
You just make me feel sad.

It seems you like the feeling,
Of causeing greif and misery,
Or do you just not realise,
That I have feelings too.

Silent whispers in the dark,
I'm hearing what you say,
Without even hearing a word,
I know what you think of me,
And I know what you say,
You try to hide your hate for me,
When I already know,
silent whispers.

When I don't rise to your anger,
And just let things slip,
You make things worse,
By finding things to slip,
It puts me down more,
Until I cut my wrists.

So I'm writing this to tell you,
I'm not taking no more,
With the sun beaming down,
And a smile on my face,
You can't take my shine,
'Cause the future is mine,

Our pretend love.

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aGood morning baby,
And how are you today,
I'd wake up every morning,
And that's what I would say,

She'd say she's fine,
But I knew this was a lie,
I could tell she was hiding something,
I could see it in her eye's...

Anyone can see,
That me and you,
Aren't meant to be,
The more we pretend,
The more hurt we get,
See I really do love you,
But you just don't love me back.

You would leave for work,
And just walk out the door,
You didn't say goodbye,
You've never done this before.

Now is the problem me,
Or something that I've done,
You tell me nothings wrong,
But I know there's something more...

Anyone can see,
That me and you,
Aren't meant to be,
The more we pretend,
The more hurt we get,
See I really do love you,
But you just don't love me back.

I made you a speciel dinner,
For when you got home,
But your nowhere to be seen,
And you've turned off your phone.

When you arive back late,
I ask you where you've been,
You just walk to our bedroom,
I can't belive what I've just seen.

Anyone can see,
That me and you,
Aren't meant to be,
The more we pretend,
The more hurt we get,
See I really do love you,
But you just don't love me back.

With my head hung low,
I began to climb the stairs,
She's saw me coming,
And she just slammed the door.

So I grabbed my coat,
Ready with my suitcase packed,
I left her life,
And I've never looked back.

My angel.

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You take my breath away,
Whenever I'm with you,
My heart skips a beat.

Your my fallen angel,
From the heavens above,
And I would be nothing,
Without your love.

Do you belive in true love too,
Because darling, I think I'm falling for you.

Your all that I need,
Your all that I want,
Your the one I've been looking for,
Your my blessing from god,
Now it's time to cherish what I got.

I can't belive that I got so lucky,
With you by my side,
I could aquire no more happieness,
Not even a world full of money.

Your smile could light a dark room,
It's brighter than the sun or moon,
I love you with a glowing passion,
Darling, we was meant to be.

Your all that I need,
Your all that I want,
Your the one I've been looking for,
Your my blessing from god,
Now it's time to cherish what I got.

So darling give me just one chance,
I could show you alot,
Just take my hand,
And let's give it a shot.

I'll never make you cry,
And I'll never put you down,
Your the one for me,
And I'll treat you like a queen.

The story of a whore.

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Hello SilGar!
Who want's to hear a story?
If you like this song,
Do you have a spare cookie for me?

Well when I first joined Silgar,
I got really bored in-game,
So I came and whored on the forums,
To try and get a big name.

But this didn't go as well as I planned,
All I gained is a giant list of haters,
As many other whores would understand,
But I just didn't care.

But then I got to know you all,
And found out who you really are,
I learned that really your all stars,
And by hating on you back,
I'd just gone too far.

Now I want to make up for it,
And hopefully one day be friends with you all,
But I know it's not easy,
Forgiving someone who's acted like a fool.

So I'm here saying sorry,
And that it won't happen again,
If I still have haters,
Just know I only wanna be friends.

So now you've heard the story,
Of a failed ex-whore,
And I'm done being stupid,
So I promise no more.

Please post your feed back.
No flame please.

[austinthe4th]

The lyrics are pretty good in most of them.
Try to make them a bit longer maybe?
i used to write songs, haven't in SO long. :\

[Propaine]

Originally Posted by austinthe4th

The lyrics are pretty good in most of them.
Try to make them a bit longer maybe?
i used to write songs, haven't in SO long. :\

I found with writing songs, 3 verses is easier.
Also in most songs you see, they have 3 verses, i just don't have the extra bit's they add in before they get released as an actual song, but I think the singers put them bit's in while singing, they aren't written into the song, so I guess a songwriters job is to make more of a template of the thing.

And some of them suck because I got stuck and couldn't think what to write, and they came to mind, lol.

thanks for your feedback.

[Propaine]

Originally Posted by ghkhg

I think you should remove your Usetitle "Silgar's SongWriter" because I'm the best songwriter. Me and Austin are in a band IRL.

I don't like you taking a position that isn't fairly yours.

Chill out man..
It's not a competition, and noone has that title, so..
Oh don't bother turning this thread into a spam or flame war either.

[Propaine]

Why are you being so horrible to me?
I haven't even been writing songs for long.

[N E O N]

haha, nice job but did u copy and paste it by anychance?

[Propaine]

Originally Posted by N E O N

haha, nice job but did u copy and paste it by anychance?

I made these 100%.

[N E O N]

nice dude
thats fairy smart :P

[austinthe4th]

Originally Posted by N E O N

nice dude
thats fairy smart :P

very smart*

Btw don't got to be smart to write songs.
Just need life experience.He means from somewhere else.

Like did you write it on a microsoft word and then copy paste it over i think.

I'd post my songs but most of them are pretty personal and not very many people have EVER seen them.

[Propaine]

Originally Posted by N E O N

nice dude
thats fairy smart :P

Smart?
How do you mean?