[money mane]

okay, so today at school in my first period of class, i was dozin off nd thought of this for a rap song, i know most dont like rap, but for the ones that do tell me if its good or not.


you is a joker, cuz u a chronic weed smoker. u go buy a bag of weed and smoke it, and u cough cuz u a cougher


this is all i got for now, tell me ur opinions and things i could do to make a whole rap song with those lyrics. you know, if i was a famous rapper, ud be famous for givin me ideas!

[vegas]

ehh its ok

[Teh Beast]

Lol. You can do alot better than that.

[King Puffy]

Aloooottt better >.>

Yo Puffy's where its at.
Don't be hatin my big pink hat.
I be the biggest pimp in S.G.
BRB gotta go take a pee.

[pretty fly]

S4F3 D0WN for mawd,
its not that hard,
vote yes,
and i might just show you my chest?


obbbbviously kidding im lame.

btw my boston accent makes me say hard like had hahaha. sorry

[iz insanity]

Originally Posted by pretty fly

s4f3 d0wn for mawd,
its not that hard,
vote yes,
and i might just show you my chest?


Obbbbviously kidding im lame.

Btw my boston accent makes me say hard like had hahaha. Sorry

this was the best rap iv'e heard in a while, youv'e got some talent

[Shadowheart]

Not too bad.

---------- Post added at 02:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:04 PM ----------

The one abt showing ur chests 4 voting is kinda like real life?

[money mane]

well thanks people, personally the people at school think its good... but i do know i can do better.. its just when i think of something good i dont have something to write it down with so i forget it... i just wrote this down when i was in school so.... and stephanie.. i like ur rap, and id love to vote yeah to see some dat skin babi gurl <3 =P